I live under the biggest rock so I have no clue about this show or book but I really love this story so I am excited for more ten out of ten in my books
XD Oh, don't worry. The show/book is ALSO totally fictional. I just like making meta-commentary about the genre and such. The "no fandom knowledge" option makes it so it plays basically like a straight fantasy IF. I'm glad you're enjoying it!
So other than MC being referred to they/them; even after choosing our pronouns(which throws me off) and the limit in choices or personality (which it's only the first chapter so I know that might change), I rather enjoyed this. I'm looking forward to more, especially spending more time with our brother.
There's an issue with the current pronoun system where it's not always switching things properly - I'm going to be changing to a different one for the Ch2 release that should fix that problem. (Though there are a few characters who will default to they/them until more familiar with the MC too so I need to comb over things and check which instances are my brilliant coding and which are just my characters. ^^') Chapter 1 is definitely mostly about exposition, with more choices and branches as the story develops. Glad you're enjoying it so far and thank you for letting me know your thoughts!
Honestly, I'm more angry and determined to kill the Uncle then the Empire. Will the cursed royal be set as oppositie your mc's gender? I usually more a m/m player then a f/m. Just curious.
The Cursed Royal's gender will be player choice. So you're more than welcome to choose Lucius instead of Lucia for your play through when they're introduced for your male MC. There's also two additional male romances planned for the story. :)
As for your anger: understandable. Auberon certainly agrees. I do plan on allowing you to choose how comfortable your MC is with the Empire too. :)
I adore this, I'm excited to read more! Since we have the narrator will we be able to see other POV's sometimes? Like Aubby if your attentiveness was picked up?
Aaaw! Thank you! There won't be any other PoV's in the main text but it's likely I'll post shorts and snippet stories of that nature over on my Tumblr since I do tend to write them for high emotion scenes to help me get in character's heads. I'll also occasionally ask for prompts too ;)
I like what you have so far! There aren't too many isekai if's, so it's nice to have another one with such an interesting plot. One thing I noticed though, is that my character was still referred to with they/them pronouns despite choosing she/her. That, and when clicking any of the buttons on the side like Character Stats and then choosing to return, you are bought to an empty page so you have to reload if you want to get back to the story. I also got a few errors.
Besides that, I thought this was a good beginning to your game. I can't wait to read more!
I'm having some computer difficulties at the moment but when I get back to full functionality I'll definitely tackle those bugs! Thank you for letting me know about them. ^^'
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very interesting... another one for the hungry sharks
This is really good can't wait to read more!
i love the more casual nature of the writing like not trying to be too serious with the narrator 4th wall breaks and such. makes for a relaxing read.
I live under the biggest rock so I have no clue about this show or book but I really love this story so I am excited for more ten out of ten in my books
XD Oh, don't worry. The show/book is ALSO totally fictional. I just like making meta-commentary about the genre and such. The "no fandom knowledge" option makes it so it plays basically like a straight fantasy IF. I'm glad you're enjoying it!
Looks promising to me. Please keep going with it. I want to see how this develops. I’ll be keeping an eye on it.
So other than MC being referred to they/them; even after choosing our pronouns(which throws me off) and the limit in choices or personality (which it's only the first chapter so I know that might change), I rather enjoyed this. I'm looking forward to more, especially spending more time with our brother.
Interesting concept but a bit too early to judge beyond that.
Totally okay with anyone withholding judgement. Hopefully what comes later isn't too disappointing! ^^ Thanks for giving it a look. :)
Honestly, I'm more angry and determined to kill the Uncle then the Empire. Will the cursed royal be set as oppositie your mc's gender? I usually more a m/m player then a f/m. Just curious.
The Cursed Royal's gender will be player choice. So you're more than welcome to choose Lucius instead of Lucia for your play through when they're introduced for your male MC. There's also two additional male romances planned for the story. :)
As for your anger: understandable. Auberon certainly agrees. I do plan on allowing you to choose how comfortable your MC is with the Empire too. :)
Yay! This definitely looks promising and I'm happy about the future options. I definitely adore Auberon. I will be his number one supporter. xD
I see Uncle sent his spies to vote me down. Lol
I had a lot of fun with this one! Looking forward tk more!
I adore this, I'm excited to read more! Since we have the narrator will we be able to see other POV's sometimes? Like Aubby if your attentiveness was picked up?
Aaaw! Thank you! There won't be any other PoV's in the main text but it's likely I'll post shorts and snippet stories of that nature over on my Tumblr since I do tend to write them for high emotion scenes to help me get in character's heads. I'll also occasionally ask for prompts too ;)
I like what you have so far! There aren't too many isekai if's, so it's nice to have another one with such an interesting plot. One thing I noticed though, is that my character was still referred to with they/them pronouns despite choosing she/her. That, and when clicking any of the buttons on the side like Character Stats and then choosing to return, you are bought to an empty page so you have to reload if you want to get back to the story. I also got a few errors.
Besides that, I thought this was a good beginning to your game. I can't wait to read more!
Glad you're enjoying it so far!
I'm having some computer difficulties at the moment but when I get back to full functionality I'll definitely tackle those bugs! Thank you for letting me know about them. ^^'